All Comments on 'The Awakening of Ms. Keys Ch. 04'

Just a little note to let you know that I submitted this story as soon as I finished writing it and that I am aware that while editing in my sleepy state I missed some typos. An edited version with corrections was submitted the very next morning when I reread it and caught them. I would imagine it will replace it very shortly.

My apologies. I know how annoying it can be read a story and have a typo throw you off the track for a moment.

Now...should I end this story here or continue? I can't decide.

I love this story, but please finish, I´m about to explode.

... Sheherezadeh might be suitable. Can you keep this up for 1001 episodes before the final consummation?

Brilliant, wicked tease.

Please don't end it here! More, please. This is wonderful.

OG,

Please ignore those idiots who just want the hot sex. This is a great story and I hope you continue it someday. The eroticism of your plot development was wonderful, very believable and easy to fall into. The sex was there the whole time only some people have to have it spelled out for them.

Now, on to read some more of your writing!

Thanks again!

really good up until now but you've started a good thing so keep it going.

...you should continue! Please, please, please!

Beautifully woven. Easily the best of this series.

I tend to like more elaborate scenarios (and generally go for the raw stuff) but this vignette really drew up a more than compelling vision. Sensually seductive. Nicely done.