All Comments on 'The Barcelona Series Pt. 01'

Your grasp of human anatomy is lacking. Average penis size is 4.5-5" length, whic is fine since the vaginal canal is about 3 to 4" in length although it can stretch up to 200% during sex. Next, if she has an orgasm just because he played with her pussy, then the problem isn't her husbands dick, the problem is them or, more accurately their lack of communication. Maybe she expects hubby to automatically know what works and what doesn't and that's not fair to either of them.

Finally, if her husband gave her the gift of a spa day, why would she go to a hotel? At night? That doesn't make sense, unless she was expecting hubby to meet her there otherwise, she would go during the morning or early afternoon to a spa.

Because you forced the story to conform to your plotline and it really doesn't work, I give you 1/5

Having visited Barcelona many times myself I am happy to see a story with an international flavor. Nice character development and interesting story line. Looking forward to the next chapter.

So I assume it has been turned off. And that turns this reader off.

Fantastic story!!!

Thanks for sharing it with us ;)

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two married cheaters...nothing more...

Forget the naysayers. Maybe you aren't 100% correct in anatomy, and maybe you did force the action at spots. This is erotica and I have reason to believe it's fiction, so it does its job; excite the reader. I wonder how exciting a story, held to real life in all aspects, would be. You have the best sense of description for foreplay I've read in a long time and I declare here and now I plan to use it as a guide in my stories. (Note: I said guide not plagiarize.)

For some unknown reason I haven't been able to vote these last few days, so until they fix the problem, this is the best I can do. *****. I sure hope I don't miss the other installments.

way overblown on every scene. everything was too fantastic

I'm like 3 inches when tumescent and my wife always said I have the biggest cock she's ever seen, and the slut has seen a few. Tell me - is she lying?? Are there guys out there with FOUR and a HALF fucking inches???

Love the Barcelona setting - supercilious but beautiful chicas, las españolas..4*

He knows she is married and yet he wants get her pissed and make her cheat even if she wants to, he shouldn't because she is another mans wife. Hope someone is screwing his wife back home.

A whore in any language. Una puta. Eine hure. Une pute. Breige. Just a whore.