All Comments on 'The Beginning - The Duet'

BookWurm,

I really like this series, story lines abit over the top but the characters are excellent. Write more and I will read and enjoy, whether this series or something different.

Thanks

Please continue with this story!!!

Myes. =)

Great storie keep up the good writting........LeRoy

Wonderful, Wonderful, Wonderful! I have reread this story multiple times and have came each time. Thank you so much. Your writing style is quite exquisite and I can't wait for Jacob's Journey!

But one small point, the part of the penile head that is covered by the foreskin, which you entitled "the glands" is actually called the "glans" or "glans penis". But apart from that and another couple of lesser spelling mistakes you told an excellent story, thankyou

Saying that on the first screw and only the second time they met? Really?