All Comments on 'The Benefit of Friends'

You can not end it like that there needs to be a continuation on this story. It is really good

Amen to the previous comment. You need to continue this story. Obviously, Natalie has MORE friends.

Your sequel has to free up our hero as Natalie is too much of a slut to stay with her. Maybe he can focus and select just one of her friends to settle down.

But please get some help on your spelling and grammar. Dana was "worn" out, not "wore" out as you wrote. And lie and lay are confusing, but you need to learn that "lied" only means someone told a fib.