All Comments on 'The Bequest Ch. 01'

This is a very will written story, I cannot wait for part 2.

i agree whats next more please soon

There are so many possible directions that this story could go. Looking forward to the next chapter to see just where you do go ... Great stuff.

So far it has really intrigued me - would love to see a Ch 02 !!!

I enjoyed Chap 1. As a previous commentator says, 'it's intriguing'. Certainly, it has left me wanting more; so get to it.

She's sixty. SIXTY!

I have hopes for the future chapters.

and I'm waiting for the next chapter. I agree that there are many ways this story can go; so get to it please.

Woodmanone

Yeah, Hornacek, if her age is problematic, you might want to not read the second chapter. She doesn't get any younger... just, you know, more involved, if you will, with the protagonist... So, while I didn't list "mature" as the category for this one (as the story will wander away from an exclusive focus on this relationship) it is relevant to note that these aren't 18-year-olds bouncing around... :) But, that said, I hope you'll enjoy what's in store for the characters.

But I would have enjoyed it a lot more if he was college-age and she was in her 40s. Oh well.

Nice intro, can't wait to see where this goes!