All Comments on 'The Bequest Ch. 03'

Make the chapters longer!!! The sex isn't rushed but having spread over at least three chapters is killing me. :)

Keep going. In fact hurry. I am wanting the next chapter now.

Very well done. Since the last comment is almost a year old, is it too much to hope for chapters 2 - 10?

And well-paced. It's clearly given the build-up the story needs. It's exactly this wordiness, that stories like this are so often lacking, that here gives the right sense of the passage of time. A pity that the story doesn't seem to have progressed any further.

Why wouldn't you at least add a few more?

I loved it! Feels like more...