All Comments on 'The Bet Ch. 02'

you should change the location to cross dresser and dump the story

Pat

Not a loving wife, two very sick motherfuckers, neither of them even sure what sex they are. Crappy story

Hot! Hot! Hot!

Ignore the comments from the people who are afraid of what really turns them on.

A big one in their mouth would silence them!

And make them happy, too!

This isn't hot, it's just nauseating. A writer expresses his or her innermost thoughts in their works. With that in mind, I recommend an immediate appointment with a psychologist for this writer.

I'm surprised at the hate here. A story isn't automatically bad just because it's not to your taste. I will agree that with the comments it generated, it is clearly in the wrong category. I'll submit an edit and change categories, where, hopefully, it will be better received.

No, it's automatically bad because it's inane and stupid. If you can't take honest reviews, don't bother posting shit.

You must not be reading the same comments I am. I see words like "sick" and "nauseating." That tells me those people are responding to the crossdressing/gender play or snowball and not necessarily the writing or even the story itself. What is "inane and stupid" to some is a big turn on to others. That's why I'm changing categories. Also, I do appreciate constructive feedback. I listened to feedback on another story, rewrote sections based on that feedback and submitted an edit.

If they are all femdom, gay, bi, TV TS TG wishes you know where the writer is coming from. I really hate someone trying to con me into reading a story type I do not like but I am doing more of story type checking.

I liked it alot. I look forward to reading the rest of the chapters. Ignore the narrow minded readers who only stick to vanilla loving wives stories. Sesami street thugs.

Thank you for that constructive response and the balanced vote. I'm new to this and, having seen a wide variety of content in the categories, am finding the limits of them. I'm not trying to con anybody, so apologize if it felt that way. I will be more careful with descriptions and try to hit the right category as well.

Sad you should not read stories on this site since you have some issues and an immature approach to adult erotic content. Please do us all a favor and stop your insults to the writers.

By your own admission, certain subjects have a better chance in the holes where they belong.

Your ability is ok but why spend your energy defending your likes in the wrong pew.

After a short partial review of your efforts - you put gay in fetish then this cross fetish in Loving Wives.

Either learn the arenas or have someone help you - out.

I loved it. I'd like to see her slowly reprogram him so he likes cock.

Whatever the comments you get, I just LOVE your writtings. Please keep on this trend whatever is splashed on you!

I seem to enjoy the way you write but get a bit put off by some of the 'endearing' names! I guess some people do talk like that and I am not suggesting you change anything. I'm looking forward to enjoying the next chapter which I am about to read.

Yeah, he walked up the stairs in 3 inch heels. In the first place, since he can't fit into her clothes or her shoes, all of this would have had to be purchased ahead of time by his wife. Can't imagine she would get the school size right without him there to try things one. And I know for certain there's no way he walks anywhere in 3 inch heels without LOTS of practice. So you've got some of the details wrong which hurts the story.

Maybe it’s on the more realistic side, but so far this “lost bet” story is pretty boring, as I’m used to a lot more emotional action. 2 parts left so I’ll try and finish.