All Comments on 'The Bike'

This is such a great story. It makes me want to go see this bike and the seller. Both seem to be very hot. I hope there is more to come. Keep up the good writing.

Copper, Great story. Makes me want a bike and a gal like you!.. You really got into the feel of a powerful beast between your legs! Let's see more Rocky Mtn Submissions!!

I enjoyed your tale immensly! Thhe reading went so fast. Your are a excellent writer, please write more!

Great story line, you are obviously a rider and you love it. Good build up and great plot. Bravo

Convincing narrative and good pace.

You sure have my attention....hope sometime we might ride?

all of your submssions are awesome..and I am certain you are too

Snakey

Certainly the best so far and hope you write more stories of different plots, a good writer that makes you read everything and not skip to the main event.

Write more...

Written with great passion and an obvious love of bikes, men and the great outdoors. One of the first stories I have read on here that didn't end like most men do after coming, roll over and go sleep :)....a lovely polished end to a great story.

...and I bet the V-Rod rumbles too. Excellent story and perfect description of your Harley. I ride an Electra Glide myself and had to read this after reading your profile.

Made me hard just thinking.....