by thebruce2
Glad to see you have resumed writing. Well written and enjoy your stories.
Excellent story with a well developed character and an ember hot slow build. I am definitely looking forward to your resumed efforts in the series. Please get back to it soon.
One of my new favorite characters. Well written and original, with a perfect pacing to the story. I loved reading it (several times in fact) and am anxiously awaiting the next chapter and seeing how it concludes. Please get back to it soon, this site needs more writing talent such as yourself, who are willing to share their gift with us.
Very well written indeed. Good character development along with good chemistry and a slow sexual tension build. Great going!
What an utterly phenominal story, the main characters huge prize winning cock and the sluts love of it is something else. I love the way he just destroys her with his cock prowess. Yes, she's his slut to fuck forever more now.