All Comments on 'The Boss'

A good beginning to what could be a very interesting series. I hope you keep it going

I hope you continue writing more.

Very good! my kind of scene

-Simos

sexy, dominant, strong, the woman most men desire and need and want to be her slave. Fantastic written story needs to be continued and developed into more domination and control and sex any and everywhere

i am a male and works for a lady at her store one day she ask me to help her at her house i said yes any thing for you that a good girl i laugh at that she call me a girl we went to her place once in side she told me can you make my a cup of coffee i said yes miss you find coffee in there and bring it to my room down the hall the door will be open i brought her coffee and sat it on table thank you dear girl just then i ask her why she call me a girl i just want to see what you would do if i call you that i told her you can call me girl if you want as a joke i ask her do want me to wear a girly apron and dress she said would you if i ask you too i said only if i only war here in the house i said yes i will wear anything you want she said that good but first that a shower and use the cream in there i will come in soon too help you wash well it was not long she came in she wash me all over then it was wash off i saw my body hair on the shower floor there now you are hair lees we girl have to be clean and shave she dry me off and sat me in a chair your hair need to be cut short i said go a head she cut it short yes now i will put make up on your face after that i was fit for a wig then came a bra with fake breast sew in to the cups now stand up girly and bend over i did as told now do you really want to be my girly maid i look up at the mirror and saw my face all done up i told her yes please make me your girl just then she told me this is going to hurt a bit put you will feel good after and beg me to do it more well i felt some hard thing go in my ass hole she told me my ass hole was tight just like a pussy she shove it all the way in it hurt first soon it felt good she ask well girl do you like this i said yes miss do you want more yes miss shove it in more just then she told me are you my girly bitch now yes miss i your bitch please boss make me a girly bitch just then she pull out and turn me around that when i saw her cock i was put on my knees and my face was at her cock i knew what she want i open my mouth and suck her cock that it girl i knew you love cock well after that i became the house wife bitch

I know this was written a while ago, but it is too bad you didn't decide to write any more. I like your style and you could have taken it further with her punishing him, etc for doing poorly.

But thanks for the story.