All Comments on 'The Break Room'

I love giving a woman pleasure like that. I love to feel her throbbing when she cums in my mouth.

After all that, a thorough sniffing and tongue fucking of her asshole would have been grand.

I Agree, in fact I only read up to the point where "no, not yet" is located. Find a way to define the characters

Confusing as hell from beginning to end - can't tell who's doing what to whom.

When both protagonists are only referred to as "she", the reader can't tell one from the other. If you can't think of names to give them, then at least differentiate them by giving a physical description of each (for example: refer to one as "the blonde" and the other as "the brunette").