All Comments on 'The Cafeteria Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Such a sweet story

It was such a sweet story of two lovers, discovering each other, falling in love, making a life for each other...together, but now it has turned into a nightmare. How can you love someone that doesn't trust you, someone that has pushed you into an uncaring relationship where there is no balance? He even passed out and Kyle was nowhere to be found. He left him alone! What if our hero was hurt? Run, man...that is NO love.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
oh good lord

i'm so caught up in this story! i'm glad that he left ..... please don't turn him into some sissy boy that loves the degradation, this was such a beautiful love story to start.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
This is shit

After a nice loving caring first chapter, this turned the perfect boyfriend Kyle into a sadistic, psycho asshole who terrorizes Ryan. I couldn’t hate what happened here more. Puke.

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