All Comments on 'The Chair Ch. 36'

by Rickd_1960

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Jerry WalfellJerry Walfellover 18 years ago
Wha?

"They go to a strip club with a gimic & bring home a dancer." What's a gimic?

Also, shorter paragraphs would make this story a lot more readable.

Rickd_1960Rickd_1960about 12 years agoAuthor
Meant to say gimmick.

Sorry Jerry W,

That should have been gimmick. "A novel device, scheme, or stratagem, especially one designed to attract attention or increase appeal"

In this case the gimmick is the contest with the remote control vibrating panties. Thanks for the feedback. - Rick

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