All Comments on 'The Chase 09: The Binding'

This was absolutely wonderful. It's good they didn't have to worry about being chased anymore and found a pack.

More...I need more of this story..I think its great..keep up the good work

i really liked this story and it would be cool if you started 1 about those 2 people you mention in those last couple of lines

Would like to know how they deal with that threat.

And, a hint when writing dialog: say the lines out loud. We spoke before we wrote so, things that don't make sense are more obvious to the ear than to the eye.