All Comments on 'The Cheating Game Ch. 02'

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Risq_001Risq_001almost 18 years ago
Sorry for the 50, but

I'm not sure which way the story is going, so I don't feel right giving it more.

I mean if you give Paul some stones to, not walk but, "RUN" away from this family, then everything leading up to how crazy they are will have been a good read.

But if you intend to make it a family of "Swingers" where everyone in the group is trading partners, then I can't say that I"m that much a fan. For me, it's one thing to make it part of the history of why the man is standing up for himself, it's another thing to make it a cheaters paradise. >=(

So till I get to the end........

Later

-Risq

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
FANTASTIC ! ! !

So far, I think this story is just Fantastic. The women lose and the men get to have their cake and eat it too. However, I am worried that Paul will not follow through. He might take a vow of only having sex with Jane, but I hope he does not.

What would really be the clincher, if all three women became pregnent by their brother-in-laws. That would truly make them a family.

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