All Comments on 'The Chemical Pt. 07'

I am enjoying this series quite a bit. However; I should point out that you need to send this to an editor prior to posting.

Don't get me wrong, I really like the series. It is inundated with grammatical and spelling errors.

Maybe it is just me, but, it loses something when one of those errors stands out.

Keep writing...I like where this story is going.

You do have a great story line here but you do need to have it proofread.

To me its the improper use of words, It makes it hard to follow the story sometimes.

Thank you and please continue writing, This is ment as constructive so please take it that way..