All Comments on 'The Club'

Where the author goes from present to past tense back and forth. It's annoying. If you want to write, please pay attention to what you're doing.

..there's only one story listed under 'Story Submissions'.

...where'd the other two stories go?

...if yer telling the trut

I feel like this belongs in erotic coupling instead of nonconsent.

Was meant for the "reluctance" part of the category rather than the "non-consent"

i loved the ending

Understanding that he wanted her and all; but did she get sober after that quicky. I would have taken her home and mabe on the way to her address that he found in her purse I would have done alot more things before we got to her place and of course at her place then left a calling card. She was jipped! and so was I.