All Comments on 'The Color of Blood - Book 01 Ch. 04'
by Niko_Drake
- 17 Comments
MizTover 13 years agoI still really like this story, but am sad that this is the end until you post again. Having just read chapters 1-4 this morning I must say that you are writing what appears to be a good story. You have thrown in a few teases such as Ricky wears red and black the same colors as Kara's dream. Richy on the other hand wears a silver necklace with a wolf on it. Are the twins Were? And what of Ell and her ability to kick in bathroom doors. Brenden so far seems normal if there is a normal. And what about Ethan? or Kara herself for that matter? And I'm just one reader, your other readers probably have questions also. So please post as soon as possible your next chapter, that may hopefully be longer than one page.
Again, looking forward to chapter 5
TheGryphonsOnFIREover 13 years agoMy gryphon's running in circals screaming that...
Yes it's as creepy as it sounds.
Personaly I think your chapters should be longer, but it's a minor quibble atm...
The story is real good other than that.
Anonymousover 13 years agoThis Story, I Think it Needs To Be Longer Though and Please Keep Writing... I Cant wait to Read what Happens. xo
willieoneover 13 years agoThere are a lot of questions and I'm not sure Brendan is normal since he showed up out of the blue and went directly to her room mate so I am thinking she is his mate. Please post more than one page at a time and more often. I do really like you story very much but this one page every year of so sucks big time!
Niko_Drakeabout 13 years agoAuthorThere is more of the story coming, it is taking much longer than I wanted because my flash drive with all my recent work on it decided to stop working. So I am having to piece everything together with my hard copy's of everything, which is taking a bit. I am so sorry everyone but there will be more up as soon as I can. Thank you to all who read my story.
Anonymousover 12 years ago....you continue with a little more depth of story and character history. What are they seeking for? Take time to keep us all waiting and wanting more, but not too much time that the readers loose interest. The People understand you wanting to get this set up correctly before submitting another chapter. Continue..............
Anonymousabout 12 years agoI have is the chapters are to short...PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE make the chapters longer. Can't wait to hear more!!
SunKisstalmost 12 years agoThis is all of chapter 4? What are u? 12? We want longer story arc! Nice concept though
Anonymousover 11 years agoHi, liking the story so far. Just curios as to where those other chapters are that you said you were going to post? It has been over a 1 1/2 since the last one.
Anonymousover 11 years agoHi, liking the story so far. Just curios as to where those other chapters are that you said you were going to post? It has been over a year and a half since the last one.
Speedy1106over 11 years agoHey, I like the story a lot. But you must be hated by quite a few of your fans for not finishing your story. One more month and it will be two years since the last chapter. If you are not going to finish the story, why don't you just update your info and tell your fans your not finishing it cause it seems that way.
Speedy1106almost 11 years agoWHY HAVE YOU GIVEN UP THIS STORY? Its dissapointing when authors don't finish their stories and don't give their fans a good reason at all.
Karadiamoonalmost 7 years agoIt's really getting good, so come back and finish it! If you need someone to edit for you, I will! kerrynesbitt@live.com
