by Just_Jezebel
Love it.. Love it... Love it!! Your writing style is unique and interesting; got lost in the story. And the ending... was not expecting that!
Well written story with many layers rolled into it. I loved the slow burn that lead up to an amazing and unexpected ending. Well deserving of 5 stars. When can we expect more?
Very well thought out story. But does the lovely hot woman in the story ever get to let it all go in real life? Forced or blackmailed and love the submissive slut she becomes who loves real man cock or maybe a few real stud men at the same time? As hubby is humiliated as he watches himself becoming a sissy cuckold? Please write more.
Positively exquisite. Enormously erotic. Can't think of enough descriptions. Just read it.
What a good story...you have got to write more...more...more!!! :)
Thanks for the positive feedback. I hadn't planned on continuing the story, but now it seems that Emily and The Man have started talking in my ear again. Guess I'm going to have to listen a little closer from now on. Look for other submissions from me in the near future.
Good story. Well laid out. Had me going the entire tale. Loved it.
... to your obvious talent for writing quality erotica, Just_Jezebel. This was an excellent and literate story which pushed all the right buttons.
I do so hope there will be more to come of this - it certainly has the potential to be something quite amazing.
Welcome to Literotica, thank you for writing for us and please, please bring us more.