All Comments on 'The Corrupted Forest Ch. 05'

This adventure has gotten intense!

This is beyond your best work. You continue to inspire me, please keep it up!

Loved it!

That means a lot, thank you. I was honestly getting worried that no one liked where I was taking this storyline. I tried to change things up a bit for my patrons to get story chapters out faster. As my chapters have always been longer and more plot driven. The challenge of writing smaller chapters has helped me get in the habit of writing faster. More plot is returning as I keep writing (have to have plot for a good story) which makes me happy.

You’ll really like the next and last chapter of this story arch. It’s already finished but I’m keeping it for a small buffer as I try to finish my CYOA’s 5th encounter for my patrons. (It’s currently the only exclusive part of my patreon, which is available for $1,3, or 5 a month.) normal stories will always come to Literotica for free though don’t worry. If I don’t finish encounter 5 by this Tuesday I’ll be posting CF ch 6 to patreon instead (either way one will go to patreon Tuesday and the other will wait til Nov 1st)

Sorry for the late reply, just happy to see stuff regarding succubi and your settings.

Will we get to see any more stuff involving Viridis herself? Because is hot!

Also, I really enjoyed the Cheshure Cat and plant girl here~.

Viridis has a scene in ch 6. Lots of things happening in the forest! Think any of the surviving adventurers will make it out? It's available to my patrons now, I'll submit it to Lit in about a week so they get a chance to enjoy it first.

Page 1: The woman poured and cried for him to return. Implored?

The part of six hadn't come close to the wizard's home. Party

Sure waking around horny hadn't been that bad. Sure, walking

The Alraune's used to be shattered about the forest, nurturing and loving." Scattered

He hands teasingly circled his aching member. Her

You wouldn't have loved it. Would

Biting her lip, she looked down his body as the twitching needing dick between his legs. Needy?

"Damn it," he screamed. Should probably have an exclamation point because of the screaming

Nes had been feeling funny ever since watching the women bathing in the lay line. Ley

His apprentice had started acting strange once they escaped the lay-line chamber. Ley

Page 3: "You're turn?" She asked in a hopeful tone. His jaw dropped as he looked at her, incredulity. Your

"You're turn to listen darling." Your

Yup those are errors. My phone is evil, i catch most of them. My mind knows what i meant when i edit my own work so they slip by, sorry =(