All Comments on 'The Couple Next Door'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Nicely done believable and teasing

I hope there is more...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Against the Tide Wimpy One

So, the wife said fuck her so I can get the big cock I need and he said I really don't want to but if you make me I will - now wasn't that studly standing your ground while your wife pimps you out!

It's Silly writer

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
While this is a really good fictional story

and it's pretty good at building towards what we all knew would be a wife swaping. In real life, there would be major problems with a wife telling her husband to fuck the neighbor wife because she wants to fuck the neighbor's husband. That's playing with fire and since the neighbor has a huge cock, as usual, it could mean the end of their marriage. And I wondering how this one would really end if it were a true story? No man I know regardless of how hot the neighbor wife was, would do it just so the wife could take the neighbor's husband and fuck him. Now there also seems to be a wife on wife sex coming. I wonder what the husband thinks has happened to his straight wife? Bad idea letting her have that big cock. she may not want to copme home. Please!!! No wimpy husbands make him a man!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Alright

You started out with a major cliche: hot new neighbor moves in, who likes to sunbathe naked. You didn't take it in a bad direction. This story works as a stroke piece, as long as you don't take it too seriously, and wisely leaves certain details vague.

don87654don87654over 18 years ago
Intriguing--And Only Natural

Looking forward to Chapter Two, and maybe more?

don87654don87654over 15 years ago
Way too long in building up!

Why are you taking so long to build up to the swinging/swapping and fucking?

TavadelphinTavadelphinalmost 12 years ago
Dan is right - BAD idea -

They are not working together here - he is being set up for disaster - wanna bet lol

BfreetorunBfreetorunalmost 11 years ago
A good story BUT.,.

Things like this almost NEVER turn out right, Sally has already said that she wants to FUCK David. Not good. I guess I am too old-fashioned and I do believe in the double standard. Still a good story. I like happy endings, I don't see one here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
ANOTHER FUCKING PUTZ

thinking with his prick...his wife is a pure slut and will end up fucking the other guy because they are obviously in to swinging.....ans Sally being the skank slut whore she is will be more than willing...she needs a good smacking about ...I hate women who whore themselves about no wonder so many marriages fail.....SLUTS

krosis666krosis666over 9 years ago
He might as well fuck Dana

Seeing as Sally has been fucking David from the very first day they moved in! How stupid is Dan? Of course she took part in the orgy that night he left the party. Just a cheating slut, and a brain-dead loser story. Typical fare.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Not MY wife!

It is reserved, reserved for ME!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

aaaaaand we're on the way to divorce court

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Nothing

Nothing or no one to care about in this too long bore.

lujon2019lujon2019over 3 years ago

when you write a cuck story use the cuck tag

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