All Comments on 'The Cruise'

I found it to be very confusing. There's no punctuation except for a period and people change from line to line. I found it hard to follow.Perhaps an editor will help! It could've been an interesting story line.Sorry, but keep trying. We all had to start somewhere.

"Ted on the other hand was handsome tall not slim yet well put together surly he was an athlete at one time."

I don't think you're quite ready to solo, dude.

you can't hide it.