by 1977TT
"Ted on the other hand was handsome tall not slim yet well put together surly he was an athlete at one time."
I don't think you're quite ready to solo, dude.
I found it to be very confusing. There's no punctuation except for a period and people change from line to line. I found it hard to follow.Perhaps an editor will help! It could've been an interesting story line.Sorry, but keep trying. We all had to start somewhere.