All Comments on 'The Cruise Ch. 01'

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KY XtianKY Xtianalmost 20 years ago
Once again, top-notch

The only thing that threw me for a loop was a change in perspective that awkwardly shows up. Would look better if it was fixed but it isn't that distracting.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
She Showed Him!

Oh, yes. She really showed her husband how much she loved him. Going off alone, fucking guy within 10 minutes of having resolved not to spread her legs for the rest of the cruise - to demonstrate her love. Then lining up a ten-man gangbang for the nite. Yep, she really loves her husband. But just for letting her be herself - a money-grubbing, old, wrinkled sewer whore, fucking anything with a cock, and living off hubby's money. True love.

And hubby? Apparently loves being married to this geriatric whore. Loser. Yeah, sure. She's going to switch back to being "faithful". That will only happen because on shore, no guy is desperate enough to hit on an old, wrinkled, dusty whore - unless she pays them enough. The jewelry store is about to do a roaring business in Rolex watches...

26thNC26thNC11 months ago

The Ho goes with the flow.

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