All Comments on 'The Dangers of Volunteer Testing'

a very entertaining and well written tale

i enjoyed it

please keep writing

Mind control is one thing, mind obliteration another. Perhaps erotic horror?

I really enjoy stories like this, with body modification as well as mental modification. I have fantasized about similar scenarios dozens of times, and it never gets old for me. The only change I would make would be to have it m/f rather than f/f, but that's just a personal preference. Obviously this would be a terrible tale if it took place in reality, but that's why it's a fantasy - safe, sexy, and fun.

Pretty good but I think you should give her a relapse of sally's memory just to torture her a little bit, maybe there could be a glitch in the system and for a day or two they could all regain their past memories and you could work on that? Great story!

awesome story please write more and please include more sex in them just please write more!!!!!!!!!!

Very well written but just too short. Loved the story but unfortunately it seems to end just as it is beginning. But with that said it stands well on its own. What I mean by those statements is that it would be well served with a sequel or more chapters. I so wanted to know what happened next!