All Comments on 'The Debt'

Just not far enough.

A story needs a beginning, middle, and end.

This one built the background (beginning) nicely, then described the high point (middle). I felt like it was already verging into the wrap-up (end), when it just quit.

With unanswered questions:

Did Gayle want to continue the sex?

If so, as fuck buddies only?

If more than FBs, how did her thinking evolve/progress until.... what? Living together? Marriage (another try for her)?

Does he require repayment of ANY of his loan?

With how it changed things in the direction he had wanted for so long, what are David's reflections on his " investment? "

It was a well-written five star story up until it quit.

Lacking the needed follow through, netted ⭐⭐⭐⭐.

Paul in Oklahoma