All Comments on 'The Education of Jasmine Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
reality plus

I loved it and could be better. the reality quotient was way up there and in a believable manner. thanks for the effort..... nzo

drksideofthemoondrksideofthemoonabout 17 years ago
Another Good Chapter...

Well done. Another good chapter...great character development and hot action...

Rad'lRad'lover 16 years ago
Enjoyed the story so far but -

in this chapter the conversations were a bit stilted and, I think, a bit more formal than they should be. Otherwise a good story. Thanks.

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