All Comments on 'The End of Evil Ch. 10'

by Xantu

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GimletEdgeGimletEdgeover 12 years ago
Like a fine home cooked dinner

Your story conjures a world of balance and grace. The characters need one another and bring out each other's best. The BDSM relationship provides a fascinating spine for the tale.

I do worry about Junie and the rubber bands on her nipples so much, but I'm sure that Master Bob keeps an eye out for her.

Thanks for bringing us this new series of stories in the "End of Evil" saga.

Gsub77Gsub77over 12 years ago
brilliant

another brilliant piece of writing, you capture the characters very well. I only hope this trial works out the way I want it to, I hate a bad ending lol. Moving on to the next chapter now, thank you again for sharing this story with us.

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