All Comments on 'The Estate Agent Ch. 01'

Excellent!

Actually, the title says it all. Very erotica, well written, paced and worded. I hope to see more of this soon.

Very nice effort and a perfect woman, a fan of small breasted thin red

heads - you had me early on with her description. Loved the easy flow and the gentle increase of erotica - thanks

I thoroughly enjoyed the first chapter, and I am looking forward to the next installment. Exciting and sexy without an over-the-top suspension of reality. Well done.

Very classy and satisfying!! ))

I liked the gradual exposure but Karen seemed to submit very easily.

A bit more resistance & more insight into her mind would make this story excellent.

So very detailed and arousing and believable. Had me hard as I read. Can't wait to read the rest.

I know there's four more parts to come, but if the other four are anywhere as hot as this, I'll definately enjoy all of them as well! As far as the rating is concerned, it's more of a 41/2 than a 4! I usually "save" 5 for strictly pantyhose stories. Although they briefly came into play, their enjoyment wasn't quite what it could have been. Other than that, Great Job and keep writting.

a great beginning the build_up was as good as suburban submission

I wish i was Mr ....

Very nice job. Good writing. I liked the way the wife and husband worked as a team. Think it helped make the story believable. Karen kept slipping deeper and deeper into their quicksand. I consider this a real success.

Beautifully written, tense, exciting. Love the theme of coercion to expose her desires... what a couple!

i hope that marriage couple is old butch couple