The Exiled One Ch. 02

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and not much else. Now I was in some hallway with a bunch of other people I didn't recognize. However, everyone else seemed to have a confused look as well. Down the hall I thought I saw Matt, but it couldn't have been him. This guy had a full head of hair, had shorts on, and certainly didn't have an artificial leg. Then I noticed other people looking at themselves, too. That's when I went into full panic mode. I looked down at my arms. These were not the arms of a 74 year old man. I felt my face. No loose skin. I felt my hair. Full head of hair. What is going on?. Just then I felt a tap on my shoulder.

"You're not thinking of going anywhere without me, are you?"

I looked over and it was Jennifer. She looked exactly the same as on the first day we met. She was 22 years old again, wearing the same dress she wore to the wedding.

"I don't want to be anywhere without you."

She put her hand in mine.

"Well, let's go then."

We walked down the hall towards a bright light. It looked like a nice place to be.

The End

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I have never given an excellent review to anyone but you are the first and a 5 star.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Good story, thoroughly enjoyed it. More, please. As a newbie contributor to Lit., please be prepared for the sickos and weirdos who would throw rocks at the perfect stories. They cannot help themselves, the are truly sick. 5 *

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

After pt 1 I thought it was going nowhere. God, if only....

Taskman1961Taskman196110 months ago

Very well done, it was a very good read.

MasterKoteMasterKote10 months ago

Don't care for reconciliation stories but the ending made up for it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Excellent story - excellent author! Very well done. Very believable

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wonderful story. To the commenters who think the husband is weak: (a) he beat the crap out of the predator and did his time in jail and (b) the predator harassed her with economic rewards, she worked late because she wanted that promotion which gave the asshole opportunity, and he drugged her, hence her indecision when he raped her (yes drugged sex is rape). If you think that makes him cuck then you are either not reading the story or you don't know what rhe word means. Reconciliation was a no brainer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

By cuckshit rabbit

Cracker270Cracker270over 2 years ago

Damn but that was an enjoyable read. Thank you

Cito22Cito22over 2 years ago

Wonderful story...

secretsalsecretsalover 3 years ago

Nice story, though it started jumping all over the place after Jason and Jen got back together.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Far too choppy and too much schmaltz.

In addition, this absolutely sealed a 1:

"Let me tell you that coercion by a older male superior on a younger, attractive, unsuspecting woman, married or not, happens more often than you think. I'm not sure you realize the power and control these men can cultivate. The power to affect one's financial livelihood and future can have tremendous influence and can surely catch someone 'off guard'. We, 'we' being my psychologist girlfriend and I, both believe that Jennifer is a victim here."

Like so in many other stories, we get the cliches of modern psychobabble and the tired trope that the little ladies can't be responsible because they lack moral agency.

lujon2019lujon2019about 4 years ago

We walked down the hall towards a bright light. It looked like a nice place to be a cuck

26thNC26thNCabout 4 years ago
Good story

I enjoyed that story. A little bit unusual, but in a good way.

26thNC26thNCalmost 6 years ago
Nice

Very touching story, greatly enjoyed. Wish you were still writing.

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