All Comments on 'The Final Gathering'

I think you write well I just wish the story was a bit longer. xD the freaky deaky part was funny.

I think this was an excellent start to a story. It wouldn't be enough to be a standalone in my opinion. It does make an excellent first chapter. I found the freaky deaky part not to really fit though lol. I think it would be great to here the story of how he finds the others or his mate and if he gets revenge. At least if he had his mate they could begin to repopulate the species. I was glad they didn't kill the humans and only drank their blood. hope you continue it.