All Comments on 'The First of May'

"Daddyhugs", this was a deliciously hot tale! I loved the threesome sex with the main character and Jan and Alice and the detail you added when describing bringing one to orgasm with fingers while fucking the other one. ;)

~Eve

not sure what to think about this story. I do like the idea of little red riding and the wolf, never thought about a sexual story along this line with a children's story before. at one point I noticed that you used the character in the third person, taking away from the meaning, making it hard to understand the story line. read your stories before you submit them, saves on the confusion from the reader.

He should have eaten both of their assholes out. Sucking each sphincter clean and tongue fucking them until they came.