All Comments on 'The Game Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Terrible Story

That was time wasted. The name of the father changed from Bill to Kurt in Chapter 3. Why? The writing was not erotic or the least bit stimulating. This was a waste of time. Poorly written drivel.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

I liked it. Wish it was longer.

AJ_zzzzAJ_zzzzabout 3 years ago

💕 I loved it, you actually displayed a fantasy of mine to be dominated with my sister, I really wished it was longer though, I hope to see a new character on the family’s new job

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