by Samuelx
overly wordy, plus you are delusional, alicia keys cannot be compared to someone you describe as naturally beautiful
Look SamuelX, you've always got some good ideas but they're always the same introduction, the same premise, the same language and the same ending. Change it up a bit. Why not do a whole story with some dialouge, some constructive erotic scenes, expand on the spanking and the roughness.
You can do better than this.