All Comments on 'The Hard Body Clerk's New Beginning Ch. 02'
by dlsloan
- 5 Comments
Anonymousalmost 17 years agoChapter 1 was great and 2 was even better. Cori's physical
attributes and sensual mindset make her quite desirable. Her youth and innocence add further appeal. The semi-incestual and nonconsensual/reluctant sexcapades make The Hard Body Shop Clerk's New Beginning the most exciting series of 2007. Thank you for your contributions and I anxiously await Chapter 3.
Anonymousalmost 17 years agoOne of the best story beginnings I've read in awhile. Make sure you keep up with the details. They lacked a little at the end of chapter one. Awesome stories though. Keep it up.
Anonymousalmost 17 years agoMay I please say that you are a brilliant writer? Absolutely brilliant? Your stories are incredible turn ons! May I suggest some short skirts and accidental exposure for Cory in SF? Thanks dlsloan, you make my day... -
A big fan.
be_cruel13almost 17 years agoFirst of all, I have to say that I love Cori because she is so sweet!!! To be completely honest, I was a little bit turned off by your Dr. Pound series, because it was just like wham-bam-thank you ma'am (or rather, thank you slut) over and over again. BUT, this series I love already!!! Keep it up!!
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