All Comments on 'The Husband's Poor Decision'

great story, prime example of man thinking with wronghead......keep up good work....

Look up the proper use of the apostrophe, and the difference between there and their.

Gramatical errors are too distracting. Couldn't get through more than a few paragraphs.

This is an arousing CFNM story, but it could be better. We readers want more details and more insights into the minds of the characters.

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The best part, IMO, was the conspiratorial actions of the women and the following dialogue: <br />

<i>My wife stopped her rubbing and quickly stood me upright. At this point I thought she came to her senses! Was I wrong! "Put your hands on your head hubby" She ordered. "You have two minutes left of your spanking, and I want to make sure my sisters can see your cock on full display!" There I was standing like a prisoner, nude with a semi hard cock in front of these hotties! <br />

My wife left the room, and as soon as she did Sara ran over to me. "I bet you are really embarrassed?" she said. "I bet I could make you really hard." And with that she pulled her pants down and shook her little butt! Here I was standing there with a great looking ass on display. Kerri ran over to aid in the assault. Kerri whispered in my ear that she was getting very wet! She said "I want to see you cum, I want to suck you off!" </i>

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The camera also heightened the embarrassment effect.

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I would have liked for at least one of the woman to have become nearly nude, but I understand that this is a CFNM story. Even if they rigged the game, it could have been closer, yielding more tension. (The description of game was too brief.)

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The story would have been better if you described what the woman saw and what they were thinking. For example, were they admiring his muscular legs as he was bent over? Were they checking out his nuts? Were his nuts swinging with each hard swat on his ass? Was one woman thinking about milking his cock? Was another thinking about taking him home and making him her slave? Was another thinking about riding his cock? Was another thinking about making him lick her pussy (or several pussies) in exchange for leniency?

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<To add a little more naughtiness, one of the women could have rubbed a little pussy juice under his nose while he was bent over to take his punishment. Another could have felt up his nuts while he wasn’t looking. They could have repeatedly done things to stimulate a boner between boner-deflating series of swats. The wife could have invited her cohorts to feel the warmth of his spanked nether cheeks. And one of them reaches stealthily between his legs to fondle his manly parts.

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The following passage was effective, though: <br />

<i>My butt was red and still stung, and now I had to stroke myself until I came. I closed my eyes and began to touch myself. I pictured all of those women completely nude. I could see all of them lined up bent over across the couch. I could see there wet pussies on full display. I pictured them with red bums, as if I had just spanked each one of them. I thought about how fun it would be to slide my finger in to those really tight ass holes! </i>

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I’d like to read a story in which he turns the tables and creates a scenario similar to that.

Why would a wife, 2 sisters-in-law, and another female friend of the sisters want to play strip poker with the one husband?!? Pointless for them! Such an unrealistic concept for a story!

It's simple to do. Bring the pain with you. You'll be surprised how fast the the stupid bitch will delete the pic and any copies after you grab a finger and break it. And if any mention is made of a repeat, show your wife the door and hand her the business card of the divorce attorney. Bitches be crazy!

This guy had an IQ of 10. Implausible story.

That he didn't want to hear any more about it. That if she brought it up again, he'd be filing for divorce. That put an end to that nonsense. Then he paid Sara a visit. After he was done with her, he had deleted all the pictures and destroyed both her phone and her computer. He told her to never talk to him or his wife again if she didn't want to see him and his baseball bat again.

He said .

Here are the divorce papers .....

I have no sympathy for him. He gambled and lost. Wow, what a surprise.

That's what happens when you think with your little head.

There is an old saying "A standing cock has no conscience".

It obviously has no brain either.

Any guy who would agree to this is ignorant and pathetic. I guess anybody who writes about it is the same though...

Why would anybody want to waste their time writing such drivel? Your whole concept is just inane and you're writing really weak. You need to find something else to do with your time.

It’s a fun and erotic humiliation story and worth a read. I would love to have had another chapter involving the next night and new punishment, but after 15 years I don’t think it will happen.