All Comments on 'The Lady in the Red Coat'

I am not sure what loose vrginity is. And I think it shoud be "being filled with the cum of her master".

but I didn't see the part, "A woman's first time, with her blackmailer" described.

I guess I'm just one of those readers that like to know the story behind the story :-) Maybe you will get to that in Part 2?

blackmailed - how? she showed up and got fucked, and went to sleep happy and satisfied - same old, same old

what was the blackmail? who was the blackmailer? why did she give in?

Snoopy did a better opening than this:

"The air was chilly, the wind blowing furiously, creating an almost false impression of the heated night that was about to come, but only for some."

First, the impression is of a cold storm (furious wind). How is this supposed to be creating a false impression for some? You 'created' a connection that doesn't yet exist.

Next, a petite woman is wearing 8" heels in this weather???? Give me a break!

Stopped there