All Comments on 'The Lady Was Bashful'

Mag, You are still the best. I love the way you can write a story, keep it believable, fun and sexy without it getting raunchy or nasty. I gave this story five stars.

Well done. Actually a surprise ending as probably we all thought is would be a cuck story. Had it been real life, he should have warned he that the guys were coming, it could have gotten ugly. But it's just a story, and the author, as with all authors, had the characters under control. Nobody got out of hand, pun intended.

Chilley

...of keeping us titillated without it seeming smutty or unbelievable.

You describe ordinary people in slightly exceptional circumstances but somehow make it seem normal, whatever that is!

Excellent - 5

The story meanders around a bit, but overall very good. Allows the reader the suspension of disbelief without become preposterous. The ending was especially satisfying.