All Comments on 'The Lost Lord Ch. 18'

i love the way you write , it is a pleasure to read ,

keep going exactly how you are :)

It's an awesome story, sometimes I feel like reading an epic like this, sometimes a short, sex filled story. You'll never please everyone, so don't try to, I say stick with your audience. Good work

Great story, with nice balance between plot, description, and the naughty bits. The pace of chapters and lengths are good, keep it flowing.

Keep writing exactly as you are right now. It is great and really entertaining. Keeps you wanting to read the next chapter.

i liked when you were doing the 2-3 stories a week. the way your doing it now in the writing is fine. yes this is literotica but i like a plot to everything to. the way you are going about it is great. i love this story and cant wait to see what rainer does

I think you've got the balance right perhaps a little longer chapters, say 5 pages, but no real complaints from me.

Keep up the good work!

5*

Mr Wolf

Good balance between plot and sex as far as I'm concerned. And anything at least close to 2 full pages is decent length. I like longer chapters, but I'm too impatient to wait for them. If you had the whole thing finished I'd say post it in its entirety, but since you're working on it I think posting at roughly regular intervals is probably the way to go. I'm enjoying it so far, thanks for posting!

Id say story over sex...there is plenty of fuck material on Lit. Not so with good story ideas that go beyond between the sheets games.

" Do you prefer stories on sites like these with more story or more sex? Also do you prefer shorter stories or longer "epics"?"

More Story. Longer Epics

Thank you for your efforts

Don't think of it as either/or when it comes to story telling. Weave a good tale and insert the sex when it becomes plot driven or appropriate. Having a sex scene between two of the female characters in the middle of the desert while their comrades are fighting for their lives, not an appropriate place. That whole scene was just awkward in its placement. Elsewhere, or as an exploration of their characters back in town, it would make sense, but not where you placed it.

Always enjoy stories that put the plot first and Sex scenes as an after thought, and even then, prefer it if the sex helps move the story along, and not just there to pad out the length or simply for the sake of a little titillation. I mean really, a three way lesbian orgy taking up a ¾ of a chapter? I know some women take awhile to reach their peak but that’s just taking the piss.

If the dirty old fuckers want a stroke story, tell ‘em to stroke it elsewhere.