All Comments on 'The Maharani Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
More Chapters please!

Absolutely loved to see Parvati given so much sexual pleasure by her lovers! With each new kingdom she takes over needs to come with it more lovers for her, both men and women! Hopefully by the end of the series, Parvati's days and nights are spent being fucked, and made love to by all of her servants, giving her orgasm after orgasm after orgasm!

budhaubudhauover 16 years ago
Philosophical porn, flowing in a river of cum

His command of the language is commendable.Many of so called porno-writers would do well to sit at his feet to learn the art of writing, in language so fluid, choosing appropriate words and expressions. He is just like the brahmin in the story.

My kudos to him, expecting more and more and more of the same standard if not better, since it is said that it is not possible to improve upon perfection !

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Great. and very natural

Well Paragon of virtue, you’ve done it again! As usual, you've written another great story, up to your usual standards. I would welcome reading another chapter of this tale. I think you have left strong impression on your reader. It is a really good story. I have said it earlier and I will say it again your stories are the best. You are a true artist. You don’t rush things make it more of a realistic. Your stories belong to the category of all time erotic greats. We cannot wait to read the next chapter.Please make the story longer dear Paragon of virtue

saima7171saima7171over 16 years ago
Great. and very natural

Well Paragon of virtue, you’ve done it again! As usual, you've written another great story, up to your usual standards. I would welcome reading another chapter of this tale. I think you have left strong impression on your reader. It is a really good story. I have said it earlier and I will say it again your stories are the best. You are a true artist. You don’t rush things make it more of a realistic. Your stories belong to the category of all time erotic greats. We cannot wait to read the next chapter.Please make the story longer dear Paragon of virtue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Nice

I am Bhavna married a hindu brahmin man and it was arranged marriage our marriage life is more than 7 years now i am 30 years old. After marriege I knoow his nature is more hard religious like Hard hindu mind who against muslim, since one year back his nature is change on friday to sunday night his voice and behiviour is change just like some handsome modrate religious muslim person he change his name also and told he is a Asif not your husband he love me like his girlfriend in this three night he fuck me whole night and I like so I also told him Asif my husband name is Manish. now he is not allowed me to wear mangalsutra I also like and I am not wear and week days i not allowed Manish to fuck and firday to saturday i am nude for Assif not for manish and he fuck me just like a Maharani story where mahmud fuck maharani and my cunt is so wet onthat time.I fill Assif fuck and Manish is watching.

In Diwali assif force me to wear sarri with out bra panty and we go out by local train in commen compart ment and we went to proper mumbai and particular in Mumbai red light Area some notorious person watched me just they fuck me now and I am dicharge on that time after we reached home he fuck me whole night still i can not forgot.

This not story or dream but fact of my life pl. understand my Bhavna.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
very nice!

A wonder full story, very well written and the Indian ness of the writing made it all the more pleasurable.also enjoyed good grammer and syntax for a change.well done and keep it up!

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