by Jeff818
I loved the buildup and the erotic encounter between the pair. I'm a sucker for romance and you just quenched my thirst. Well done...
felt a little rushed and unfocused, and the introduction of Geoffrey was very abrupt, out of nowhere... other then that, a very sweet, romantic story.
Thanks for serving up a romantic/erotic fantasy which becomes a steamy romantic/erotic reality. You leave just enough room for my imagination to fill in the blanks. Works every time... <wink>
This sweet, romantic story resonates with those of us who wish our dream lovers would be real. Thank you, Jeff818!
thats was amazzing...so romantic yet erotic and beautiful. i just loved it, soo touching and sweet. i should have a fantasy man and mayb i'll get him too ;-)
OK HERE WE GO .... I HAVE READ ALOT OF STORIES AND THIS ONE IS VERY VERY HOTTTTT,,,, WE HAVE ALL DREAMED OF A LOVER,, WELL THIS ONE I WOULD LOVE TO HAVE AS MINE,,AFTER READING A FEW STORIES BY THIS MAN,, I HAVE TO TAKE A COLD SHOWER,,,,
You really have a way with words. Very sweet and loving with a amazing ending. It leaves the reader feeling very satisfied and hoping for a part two. Very well written!