All Comments on 'The Mark'

Love it. Please update soon.

A great way to start your story. Looking forward to seeing how is all unfolds.

Just one little thing...It should be "bears a mark," not "bares a mark." I wouldn't mention it, except it looks like you might be using that phrase a lot ;-)

I gotta have more this is an amazing story so far

Great start, i'm hooked on it. Please update soon.

I'm hooked on it already and cannot wait for the next chapter. Please post it soon.

With an opening chapter like this, I hope there's more on the way soon!

I want to thank everyone for their comments and even the correction. I already completed chapter two and it would be up soon.

You have my interest peaked. Looks like everyone pointed out the errors so I won't repeat on those. But must say you have my attention. I look forward to seeing what they next chapter holds.

I'm so excited eventhough you teased us with a short first chapter.

I guess Lashaya got a real shellshock there and I look forward to the rest of the story

Sitting on the edge of my seat eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

Very interesting story, I'm looking forward to reading more of this tale.

I'm already intrigued and am looking forward to the next chapter

that was awesome i so wanna find out what happens next ...................that was a good teaser ending by the way

Im confused as to how this qualifies as 'nonhuman'. If anything, this should qualify as 'non-erotic'. A good setup none the less, I wait with baited breath to see where this goes

You have an interesting premise and I am interested to see where you go with it. You may want to have someone check your grammar and spelling, however, before submission.

What a teaser......................... :D

Apostrophes are your friends until you abuse them.

While the premise is intriguing, your grammatical errors make it hard to read.

ano under me. if u read so much you look over the mistakes and read. if u think u can do better u write a story and have ppl jugde you. its a free country. live with it