All Comments on 'The Motel'

but I like your way with voices. Ty

It is not often that I read a story from a true voyeur. It was brilliant! Thank you very much. I am sure that you have many, many more tales to tell.

I loved it Helen, the story seemed to move effortlessly along without any abrupt changes in tone. I always assumed it was us men who were the voyeurs, but obviouslt not.