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sudburyguysudburyguyover 14 years ago
fun little story

needs an impregnation angle eventually

Greystreet0523Greystreet0523over 14 years ago
When the advantage falls into your lad

You should always try to get what you can. Something similar happened to me a few years ago and I took full advantage. I think I might write about it, soon.

Poizon69Poizon69over 14 years ago
Interesting start to a story.

I like the idea that even though Debbie starts off not liking the idea of what Mr groves proposes, but in the end she gets to like it. Nice story.

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