All Comments on 'The Old Flame'

Why bother staying married.

You live in a goddamn dream world!! No husband would send his wife off to meet an old "flame". Get real, this story smells to high heaven............

You live in a goddamn dream world!! No husband would send his wife off to meet an old "flame". Get real, this story smells to high heaven............

In the mind of a creative author, even infidelity can be beautiful, when the end result is that she still comes back to her husband. She stretches her wings and tries other excitement in her sex life, but still finds that she loves her soul mate even more than she knew. This is a well written fantasy, and has a good ending. Thanks for the post.....Rich

Pure disgusting garbage and not worth reading.

Well, putting aside the husband letting her go make love to her lover, we have a great build up. The details, such as carrying her shoes are creative and very well done. When she takes him in her mouth, it's as if you got bored and quit. Surly she did not go through all of that erotic buildup to just swallow a load of cum, put on her dress, and buy a Starbucks on the way home to have her husband satisfy her. I do wish you would describe the rest of the evening's encounter. You started it so very well

This "story" lacks any and all imagination. How dull! How droll! Not worth the time it took to read it. I hope that it had some recuperative or medical value to the author. He/she needs it!!!

Why cheat and why would a husband want her to cheat. I know a lot of strong men and am not weak myself, one trait in common, we don't share well, the other is fidelity. May be your fantesy but not belivable at all. Writing pretty good, please try again.

and prose the slut is nothing but a skank and her husband is nothing but a wimp and the old flame is nothing but a sexual predator

The commentaries amaze me. It was a fine bit of erotic literature, and not a true story, though it could be in my opinion. Why in the world did they speak of cheating? The husband approved it, that is not much different from an MFM!

Have we been taken over by the moral majority?? It could be

criticized as being too light, too quick or even too fantastic but it was fun. Thanks.

When I say it needs work, I mean two things: (1) You've got to provide some information that would allow the reader to understand why the husband is willing to share his wife; and (2) much editing is needed both for correct grammar and typos. Do you really mean to use the word "pore" twice in reference to the act of pouring champagne? Let's hope the champagne did not come out of sweat pores!

people with there poor life and where besides that husband and wife were not able to live a full life was an erotic scene?

in her mouth instead of in her month.

loins. She had been conducting and extended love affair with her high school fucker for years. A shame she didnt love her husband enough to move on and mature. Wonder if they did medical testing before the act? Wonder if the husband will wait a year for her to test negative before having sex with her again?

You'd be surprised how often this truly happens, and even more thought of even if not acted out. It is not "cheating" when all parties agree . . . it is just playing by different rules. There are some very judgmental people out there, slamming others and calling them names when they don't understand who these people really are. Somehow, this kind of story really threatens some people. Not a great story, but an interesting look at a different view of life.l

What did the wife give the husband? a mind drug if that was me she would be heading for the divorce court the husband is so soft headed someone should wake him up and set him straight as what the stupid wife is doing to him.

wOW, ANOTHER SICK-O AUTHOR

wOW, ANOTHER SICK-O AUTHOR

its great that you are writing and found "Your Letter to Sweetness" to be an interesting experiment. But! (Why is there always a but?) I would enjoy the story more if it were told as a dialog, between the husband and the wife, between the lover and the wife, rather than using a third party narrator (God looking down and describing the motives and desires of the little people on earth below! LOL!)<br><P>

As for the story — there are good aspects to it. It is a short story, and tries to cover a short period of time and a limited incident. There are also several portions of the story (as others have pointed out) that are very descriptive, verging on the poetic.<br><P>

As for the plot — I guess there will always be some people who like such stories, and those who don't. Perhaps this story should have gone into a category like 'erotic couplings', where there is less of an emphasis on the relationship with the husband, and the motivations of the spouses within their marriage.

Aside from that it was strange. The husband is described repeatedly as being OK with this and even 'delighted'. If so, what is he up to?

"Oh dear my loving him and spending time making love to him only makes my love for you stronger" BULLSHIT. Wives have been smart enough to reject that line for the past few hundred years. Now you want men to swallow it? Not no, but HELL NO. The bitch can stay with old numb nuts. Leave the poor husband alone to get on with his life.

...can discribe my feelings after reading this one: awefull!

...this one just sickened me..sorry..

Cheating means no love or respect for the spouse...How could she say she loved and respected her husband...Only for mitigate her guilty...

This cheating whore's story didn't get much love , and it's easy to see why. This bitch is awful.

No, there was more slut in that bitch than her husband had suspected. Love had nothing to do with this pretentious mess.

Would love to read more of their encounter