All Comments on 'The Overcoming of Two'

Lovely writing. I'd have liked more on Katie and Mark's coming together, but it leads well into a sequel. More please.

Isn't this every working-single-guys dream?

AWESOME story. You kind of rushed the ending there a bit, but it didn't hurt MY rating.

Other tips... There is a confusion to me (maybe I read it too fast) as to who was wearing the wet boxers... and a few other things like mispellings, but nothing overly major! GREAT STORY