by masterofcontrol2003
You have such a tremendous talent. thank You for sharing this talent.
This story left my heart beating and my pussy pulsing!! Loved it
You have the rare ability to be both sensuous and raunchy at the same time! I loved the story, and am anxious to hear about the last couple...
Lot's of clever metaphors.... good literary quality, and yet, not lacking for kink. I loved the great anal descriptions, the sub licking the cock right after it came out of her rectum, the long slender cock up her ass. Great stuff.
I'm sure you wrote this for a special person, and I am sure she will cum like crazy when she reads it.
Yeah, I loved it. I am wondering about the last couple. I can't imagine that just one couple will be as fun as the party though.
It's a wonderful story, shows love and affection along with pussy wetting kink. I love it more and more each time I read it.
Please continue the story...I'm waiting for the final couple.
As I read this wonderful story my pussy started dripping, my clit is throbbingI imagined my self as the lucky sub
I enjoyed reading this so very much. Very well-written, and gives a great sense of what each person - the Dom and the sub - is feeling in the moment. And it depicts a fabulous scenario.
Well written - good character descriptions - good use of Dom and Sub - anxious for more.