All Comments on 'The Payment Plan Ch. 03'

This story seems to have been written by a 8th grader

It is hard to keep up with and is writen part of the time using street talk

Loved the sex scene !! Reading this at work, so I will probably have to wait til tomorrow to get to the next chapter : (

To the person who wrote the previous comment... "written by an 8th grader" ?? ... ummm... any 8th grader that had the sexual knowledge to write that will seriously need therapy by the age of 20. As for the comment about "street talk"... LOL... they were street people!! ... D'uh !!! Criticism should be constructive, not just ignorant ramblings : )