by gmikeisbad
I skimmed it to see if you were going to have even a single clever or original section and you don't, so just save us all the time and don't continue writing this sorry tale of women torturing a man. There's nothing remotely interesting or believable in your writing. Even in a fictional story he would have gotten away from her long ago. The rest is just horse pucky.
I read the entire series hoping it would get better. It got worse. Seemed to be written by the mind of a teenage boy. Call if a sex robot but there very little sex. Not erotic at all