All Comments on 'The Pink Silk Robe'

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Agoodman951Agoodman951almost 16 years ago
Great Story

Take it from a man who loves eating pussy. This was a great story. When you can get a woman to respond like this it is just fantastic. I'd really like for this story to continue, and I look forward to the sequel, so keep writting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
A beginning with potential

But use of the present tense is only one problem; the other is a lack of dialogue until the very end. "How do you want/like [whatever]"; do this , do that, harder, softer, instructions to the partner, etc. would have made a good premise a great story -- if done right.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
HOLY HELL ! LOL

OMG ! That was so what i was talking about now thats the hotness right there lol ! Thank you for the wonderful story its exactly what i discribled that i liked babydoll ...

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